No it is not the music I have the music and it doesnt sound like it
Ur wrong its perfect.
Perfect except for the g e g at the end of the fourth line
For the G E G at the end of the fourth line just take the G at the end and add it to the beginning of the fifth line
I think the last B in the second line sounds better as an E, I just tried it out on my flute but either than that it sounds great :)